I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I found this story quite good, in the beginning. The characters were likable, and there seemed to be a general idea of where we may be headed. Once our main character, Connie, gets to Los Angeles, the plot kind of fell apart for me. It was really hard to follow, with a lot of jumps between past and present tense. There were a few very random plots tossed into the story as it went along as well. Suddenly throwing in that Connie had been to medical school? That Mr BB has cancer? That Jack loves weird food? None of these things felt like they flowed with the story, but more like they ended up in there as a check list item nearly forgotten.
I didn't hate it, but I think it could have been a little smoother of a read.
Maybe you have a different opinion on the story? I'm always open to different opinions!!
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